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[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

Soo...


Why do wrestlers need dictonaries, spell checkers, and what in the world are RPs?

I mean, I know that I'm watching these wrestlers come on television and do interviews.


Out of character: Good spelling, writing, grammar are important. You're trying to WRITE a good ROLEPLAY.

But IN CHARACTER: You're doing TELEVISED interviews where you speak and are seen.

Just sayin'.

[immortal]

o ok

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

scotty said:

May I just say, nice work on the NPC page. Are all of the managers going to end up on there eventually?

I think in ring angles duing shows should be the providence of the worker and the writers. If a worker wants to do the interview/angle/ect, it should be his responsability to set it up, write it, and submit it.

Of course, that's just my two cents.

I think I will only add managers that are tied into NAPW somehow. Bill Fleming began life as an NAPW reporter, and Terry Brandon is a character separate from the wrestlers he manages.

Wheras Tiffany is tied to The Dudes, and probably would not stay in the fed if The Dudes left. Hence, keeping her off the NPC/Staff page. But I mean, that can change.

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

Seriously.


D/Casino. Dudes/D-X. Mirage/Ravager. Immortal/Minstrel. Static & Rex. We had a couple no-shows this week, but seriously.


You guys all rock. It sucks that any of you have to lose, but understand that even losing, I'm going to work hard to make you look good, and there will be more opportunities comin' your way.

[theminstrel]

Seriously gues I agree, this week was awesome, I was very impressed with everyone's work and if we keep this up, we're gonna have some very tight competition in the coming months.

[Static]

i told ryan (the pres) the moment i read the card, "dude, this is the best card there's been in napw. better than opening night, better than black thursday." it was so cool to see everything kinda mashed together and the inspiration that followed. great job guys.

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

Unbelievable show from everybody involved. Thanks to D!(Immortal/Minstrel), Scott The Dude (Caliber/Static/Decaps) and Brion Casino(Ravager/Mirage) for a lot of help!

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

We're back! Credit to Diego, Jago, Brion and Scott for match-writing. Brion, you sick bastard with your light tubes...


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[Ravager]

Good show all around.

I marked out just a little when the light tubes came out. Sick, disgusting, and damn you for thinking about it before I did! Brilliant!!!

Great behind the scenes stuff, with the post match Axell Jaxx/Maniac, and the Static/Rex/Fleming confrontation.

And Terry Brandon's stable grows by one? This can't be good for the rest of the NAPW.....

Keep up the good work everyone.

[maniac]

I loved how Maniac was portrayed in that show...whoever wrote it did a bit of research on him and I appreciate that big time.

Excellent job, I'll be here for a long time.

[The Crusher (Rebel Pro)]

Hey Im not trying to take the Credit for Talon But i was the one the got him here oh im also a Popular enemy of the WWA but im Really keeping are league on the Down lown Right now.Until the time is right or if the President gives me the thumbs up.

[The Delivery Men]

maniac said:

I loved how Maniac was portrayed in that show...whoever wrote it did a bit of research on him and I appreciate that big time.

It's especially awesome that you wrote that, 'cause I was kicking myself after submitting it, going "Old New Guy's gonna hate it, Old New Guy's gonna hate it."

But to be fair, credit the Pres for some of that, as he's the guy who sketched out how the characters should come across, and then us hacks flesh out the booking. So stuff like this is pretty collaborative, which helps keep the stuff unpredictable and the parties involved less burnt-out.

[maniac]

deliverymen said:

maniac said:

I loved how Maniac was portrayed in that show...whoever wrote it did a bit of research on him and I appreciate that big time.

It's especially awesome that you wrote that, 'cause I was kicking myself after submitting it, going "Old New Guy's gonna hate it, Old New Guy's gonna hate it."

But to be fair, credit the Pres for some of that, as he's the guy who sketched out how the characters should come across, and then us hacks flesh out the booking. So stuff like this is pretty collaborative, which helps keep the stuff unpredictable and the parties involved less burnt-out.

Honestly, I didn't expect that at all, it was a pleasant surprise. Well done, I won't forget it.

[Static]

helluva show, guys.

["Perfection" Evan Cartwright]

Excellent work, all involved. I know how tough it is running the place and writing the matches (used to do it in a past fed with Mr. Casino none the less) and I really appreciate the hard work you guys do. I think I'll help write a match for the coming week to do my part in helping out, just want to start getting my feet wet again and familiarize myself with the feds and its denizens. Again, great job all, keep up.