Ongoing Feedback Thread!

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

I just want to keep a thread at the top of the OOC board to continue feedback. Give hooplah and howzits on shows, roleplays, angles. Criticism is allowed as well, but keep it constructive (or better yet, use the private message function and keep it on the downlow.)



Thanks to D! and Stylin' Kyle for writing Khaos/Immortal and Nightmare/Joey on the November 17 Action! I appreciate it, boys. Good jorb.

[D!]

I know everyone's still getting a feel for their characters, but my wish is that Supercard will finally establish who's heel, who's face. There's waaay too much tweening going on.

On a separate note, I enjoyed writing my first match. More, please!

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

Agreed. I think it's ok to say, hey, I'm a face, and we'll book you as a face. But when you're SO playing a heel it just doesn't make sense.

Stone Cold was a heel who was cheered as a face. But the key there is that he began as a heel, and the fans naturally got behind him. He wasn't a heel that people were inexplicably expected to cheer.

But that's why I'm booking. =D

[brion]

pretty sure I'm a heel. and I enjoy being here. it's been ages since I have been in an e fed.

[Nightmare]

I think I want to be a heel, although I acted as a face on TNF...so I'm not sure

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

You helped Misery kick the snot out of JC Cook. You're a heel, chief.

[Stylin' Kyle Roberts [REBEL]]

Immortal, however? Faciest heel that ever heeled. Or is that 'facied heel that ever faced?'

With me and Bruce, though, there's no question we're heels and we intend on staying that way until the crowd (Pres) MAKES us faces.

[immortal]

jago said:

Immortal, however? Faciest heel that ever heeled. Or is that 'facied heel that ever faced?'

What did you just say?

[Stylin' Kyle Roberts [REBEL]]

immortal said:

jago said:

Immortal, however? Faciest heel that ever heeled. Or is that 'facied heel that ever faced?'

What did you just say?

Dude, don't take this as anything other than constructive criticism, but the fact is, heels don't agonize over the fact that they're heels. Heels don't feel remorse for what they did in the ring and ask for a rematch on the face's terms to hopefully become his friend.

Those things are what faces do. So I really hope you're turning face. Because I don't see a point for that promo if it was intended to be anything other than the seeds for a turn to the light side.

[D!]

Heels also don't call themselves heels, any more than they would yell "I'm going to blade now!" at the audience. Insider terms such as "face", "heel", "turn" or "heat" are fine for video games, but generally don't get used in promos all that often.

[Ravager]

I'm enjoying the writing Ravager right now. I'm supposed to be a heel, but circumstances turned me face, and I really don't have to change too much of what I do. I agree that it really needs to be established who's face and who's heel.

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ravager said:

I'm enjoying the writing Ravager right now. I'm supposed to be a heel, but circumstances turned me face, and I really don't have to change too much of what I do. I agree that it really needs to be established who's face and who's heel.

in terms of our fued, i think that the boundaries will work themselves out after the supercard.

[brion]

hey great show - waaaay better than anything you've done since.

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

Really great show this week, and much thanks to D! for a freakin' sweet hardcore mach and Stylin' Kyle for Misery/Mirage. Good jorrrrrrb.

[Stylin' Kyle Roberts [REBEL]]

I echo Misery. Out of anything you've written as of today, that show was definitely the best.