Jacob needs help, boyz. (ALL READ)

[Nightmare]

What, now?

[Patrick Bickle]

Kyle and Ryan both mentioned how the excessive and inappropriate use of italics could take away from a promo, and in this most recent one you used them more excessively and inappropriately than even. I thought it might be you mocking that suggestion in jest.

[Nightmare]

If you are talking about the text in red, I intentionally made it in italics for an obvious reason. If not, what are you talking about?

EDIT: I put the red text in italics for the same principle as the scene description text.

EDIT: I actually really tried not to use italics at all in speech. Only where appropriate did I even use italics.

[Patrick Bickle]

You used italics in 19 separate occasions in dialogue. I am not talking about the red, or the narration in brackets. 19 uses of italics, sometimes more than one word in those places.

I consider that excessive and often not applicable.

[Nightmare]

19 italics uses out of 31 dialogues. (Yeah, I can count. ;D ) So cut it WAY down, then.

["Perfection" Evan Cartwright]

The Second Italic Wars! Jacob tries to cross the Rockies with a pack of pachyderms in an effort to invade Edmonton.

[Stylin' Kyle Roberts [REBEL]]

If he's crossing the Rockies, he'd be invading Kamloops.

["Perfection" Evan Cartwright]

Fine, Kamloops it is.

Wait, no... cause Rome was pretty far from the Alps; ergo, Edmonton is a viable option.

Ugh, even I want to hit me now.