Long beach wrestling website

[The Crusher (Rebel Pro)]

This is for the Prez films16.tripod.com/longbeachwrestling
and Thomas Deathrow you are on my roster temporarily depends if you win the Championship or not well prez thats the link its not fully done yet some things might look wierd

[mysterypartner]

An outsider's suggestion

I would get rid of the WWE trademarks, including the pics of WWE wrestlers as well as the WWE logos like the Saturday Night Main Event logo, and the No Way out poster.WWE has started cracking down on people using there stuff, and about a year or so ago when they started their Fantasy fed thing they actually ahd a bunch of feds shut down for using their stuff, now most of that was real character feds, but I always thought it was better to paly it safe, thats why i always suggest people use someone besides a real wrestler as a character pic base.

On the upcoming events page it has Joke lsited talking about his enxt match and then udner it, it says $5000 and up that through me off. Either tickets are super expensive, or are you trying to sell the wrestler?

I would change the show name and slogan as well as they both really scream WWE rip off especially using the SNME logo and smackdown's chasing friday nights slogan slightly modified.

I know this is a work in progress, but atitle hsitory and a page telling the LBW history would be good to attract people to the fed, and to explain to people the history of the fed, and let them know what to expect.


Also I have nothing against fed heads/owners holding a title or the top title as long as it can be done objectively and fairly, but I don't think it should be advertised as a selling point unless it's part of your gimmick/storyline. It tends to scare somepeople away from teh fed if they see the owner holding the big belt they wonder if they are going to get a fare shake in that fed. So it's normally good to keep that on the downlow until a wrestler joins and they see that u deserve to be cahmpion ad that your giving everyone equal oppurtunity.

I don't know what type of reality your going for but Alex Wright is a real wrestler and Joker is a copywrighted character to Dc Comics and warner borthers iw ould stay away from them for the same reasons listed above with the WWE stuff. It's fan fic so you arent really breaking any laws, so tht jsut comes down to pesonal preference.


Things as an interested fan that I'd like to see is an archive to old shows, a complete title history, a in character Company mission statement telling about the hsitory of the company, what to expect from the company on it's shows etc.

an ooc info page would be nice to where a potential handler can see what the fed's rules are, rp limits, whether the fed is angled, or competion based any thing else that might effect someone's decision to join a company. Also OOC information on the person running the fed like an e-mail or messenger name where he can be reached with questions concerning the fed or joining the roster.


I know you don't know me from who shot John, but I figured I'd post some suggestions, and ideas/questions, take them for what you will. Just figured I'd toss a couple things out there, hope everything goes well with getting the fed up and running.

*disappears abck into the shadows*

[Ravager]

Joker is also a CZW mainstay.

[Ryan Ro [NAPW]]

a name like joker isn't exactly "unique", it'll show up all over the place in e-wrestling. Heh.

[Stone Zellor]

films16.tripod.com/longbeachwrestling/id6.html

That page would put me off. As a rule there a number of pages a fed should have in order to attract rp'ers. Rules. General Info. Some sort of history. Maybe a link to the forums. Also, if you want a new look I could try and crack out a site for you.

[Patrick Bickle]

It DOES specifically say "The,Joker (Batmans Foe)", so its not exactly a possible separate Joker. Either way...

[Jacob]

And I can also help out with a good site set-up.

[Jacob]

On this subject, I'm reopening DWA's roster, if anyone's interested. Here's the link.

www.freewebs.com/mirage902/

[The Crusher (Rebel Pro)]

Yeah i would like for you to help me out with presenatation of the site jacob and also add me to the roster.

[Stone Zellor]

OKay, I now realise I can't make sites other then my own ... Sorry

["Superstar" Deathrow]

Maybe its just me. But where the (BLEEP). Is your god damn RP board? Shit seems a little overly (BLEEP)ing stupid if you ask me. But than most people questions are better off, asked not toward me. Also I suppose know one asked me. Other than myself. But for the roster size. You'd thik you would have some type of board in play for the hell of it. Unless you are playing 95% of your roster? You an Jacob huh? Go E.T. go you can make it home. Forget Elltiot. You an you damn boys in the Hood. Always trying to act hard.

[Stylin' Kyle Roberts [REBEL]]

I've been wondering about that. I couldn't find a single link to any sort of LBW board, just what James put up as a main news site.